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“Eleanor Remembers”

Eleanor Remembers

 

— Cortland

 

 

It was the kind of town where if your neighbors

  saw you walking, they assumed you’d lost your license —

    too many DUIs — or your car, too many payments

 

missed. All winter piles of gray snow made tunnels

  of the sidewalks, shrouded the scrawny brown lawns,

    the pickups on blocks in front of shotgun houses

 

so small and poorly made it seemed a miracle

  to see them standing, their yellow lights faint

    behind thinned kitchen curtains in the early dark.

 

More bars than churches, one long block of shops

  where brats like me bought tie-dyed tee shirts

    and black candles, patchouli and my famous

 

crushed velvet overalls with the pink satin rose

  embroidered on the bib. That battered army jacket

    like the one you’d worn in Nam. It’s true

 

we lived beside the railroad tracks, walked miles

  of dirt road to suffer third shift at Smith Corona —

    two fools dreaming of some rock and roll Utopia

 

where all day we’d drift in endless spring,

  feast on fruit that dropped ripe and unblemished

    from mescaline-radiant trees, the air clean

 

and lush with music that never stopped. No shrilling

  factory floor or time-clocks, no sullen foreman

    hissing freaks when we passed. Your father rose

 

each day to beer in a jelly glass, Pall Malls

  and dirty novels, leered at me when we emerged

    from your room, imagining my mouth

 

on your shoulder, our narrow bed among

  apocalyptic visions of flood and fire you’d drawn

    on the black-lit walls. But then, this too —

 

AJ’s farm, somebody’s kids always tearing it up

  in the rough grass, So What or River

    cool on repeat through the torn screen door.

 

Behind the barn, that pond we pelted,

  laughing, with broken glass and ashes, twitching

    fish unperturbed among the slender stems

 

of water lilies swaying in the green-gold murk.

  Late autumn’s crystalline light, the wind fragrant

    with apples. At night, too many stars to count.

Contributor
Susan Aizenberg

Susan Aizenberg’s newest collection is A Walk with Frank O’Hara and Other Poems (University of New Mexico Pres, 2024). She is the author as well of Quiet City (BkMk 2015) and Muse (Crab Orchard 2002), and co-editor with Erin Belieu of The Extraordinary Tide: New Poetry by American Women (Columbia University. Press, 2001). Recent poems have appeared or are forthcoming in Plume, ABQinPrint, SWIMM, Hole in the Head Review and elsewhere. Her awards include the VCU Levis Prize and the Nebraska Book Award for Poetry. Aizenberg lives and writes in Iowa City.

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