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“Dream Poem” and “Cinnamon”

Dream Poem 

 

I dreamt I wrote a cop show

about a special unit that goes after poems

that don’t make sense. In the pilot,

the lead detective meets a poet at AA

and goes back to her place to “write a villanelle,”

waking up the next morning to find her dead

beside him and the villanelle gone.

You really murdered that sestina

says the officer questioning an MFA candidate

while leafing through his thesis.

Maybe, says Good Cop, sitting on his desk,

but you could still save it if you’d just

put it in your own words.

Google Do’s & Don’t’s for writing great poems

suggests the assistant DA.

That just shows how much you know,

mutters the oft-ignored rookie.

 

My wife says no one wants to hear your dreams

but that has never stopped her.

Brooke said I should just hop on the next plane

to Hollywood. Michael said put your pen down

very slowly and back away from your desk.

Judy says it might make a good poem

but at this point it’s little more than a gag.

 

I wonder what my therapist would say

back when I had one — up in her shady

corner office, four mornings a week,

I must’ve been desperate to agree to that.

I wonder if those sessions did much good —

sure, she had some valid points:

my dad’s elusive attentions, my mom’s

smoldering needs — which hardly made me

unique. But at least she didn’t say

So how did the dream make you feel? 

And since it made me feel

like writing this poem, then maybe it

wasn’t a total waste. Thank you,

 

whatever your name was, sitting there

mostly silent, recording my dreams —

which hardly offered answers.

But I remember you, my detective,

ushering me into your office, ready

to sift through clues, trying to help

me make sense of myself.

 

 

*     *     *     *     *

 

 

Cinnamon

 

My brother says he almost didn’t call

but they found something on his scan

that they’re thinking might not belong —

they hope to know more from the biopsy.

I’m watching a chipmunk out the window

crouching on a log to clean his paws

like someone bending down to say prayers.

While my brother waits for me to respond,

in that silence I see him shuffling

down the stairs as an infant and sucking

his thumb, which he removes with a pop

to ask if I’ll make the French toast again.

I tell him we’ve run out of cinnamon.

Contributor
Donald Nitchie

Donald Nitchie’s chapbook, Driving Lessons, was published in 2008. He poems have appeared in Salamander, Martha’s Vineyard Arts & Ideas,The Cape Cod Review, and the 2021 anthology The Farther Shore: Exploring the Cape & Islands Through Poetry. Since 2018 he has led in-class writing workshops — Poetry Drop-Ins —through the Martha’s Vineyard libraries.

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